After our peers watching the Rough Cut of our film we have the following feedback:
Shots: They felt there was a variety of shots used including establishing, panning, tilt shot and wide shots.
Mise-en-scene: They felt that it worked with the genre. The costume was well thought out and the fact the killers face was never shown created questions from the audience. The props were well chosen such as the knife, can of beer and sheets of paper - this gave an idea of the killers psychological aspects.
Sound: They liked the ambient sound used such as the footsteps, crumpling of paper and the door slamming at the end of the scene.
Editing: They felt that there was a lack of transitions with only jump cuts being used. However they felt that it made the sequence fast as the shot duration was quick.
Improvements: There is a continuity issue involving the folder and knife near the end of the scene. This needs to be changed/improved so the audience understands the sequence more clearly.
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